The number of mistakes that can be crammed into a single paragraph Yahoo! Shine is a wonder to behold:
What’s so wrong? How about
- star’s should be stars’ since it refers to more than one person
- camera ready needs a hyphen
- $500 dollar doesn’t need dollar since it includes a dollar sign
- five hour also needs a hyphen
- work outs is a misspelling of workouts
- to few should be to a few
- Danny Evan is not the man’s name; he’s Danny Evans
- apostrophes are no substitute for quotation marks
The real wonder is the fact that this was written by a professional.
