And then I stopped reading. And then I stopped reading

I couldn’t do it. I just couldn’t read past the first paragraph of this article on Yahoo! Health:

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That was all I needed to know that this was not a piece of writing that I could trust. This article was not fact-checked, edited, or even proofread, and yet it was about the critical topic of health. Next time I’m looking for reliable information, I’ll go to WebMD.

Any takers? Any takers?

I’m willin’ to bet a dozen Boston Creme donuts that no one on the Yahoo! Celebrity editorial team proofread this little paragraph:

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Any takers?

Do I repeat myself? Do I repeat myself?

What are the chances that this paragraph was proofread by someone at Yahoo! TV? What are the chances that this paragraph was proofread by someone at Yahoo! TV? What are the chances that this paragraph was proofread by someone at Yahoo! TV?

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A shoo-in for Worst Travel Writing of the Day

What makes this article on Yahoo! Travel a candidate for Worst Travel Writing of the Day? It could be this paragraph, which starts out with a non-sentence and then gets a tad repetitive:

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OK, so that was ugly. Maybe it was just a fluke. What could possibly be wrong with this?

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Well, in the first place, the Capital Wheel is not in Washington.  It’s in Maryland. That’s kinda a giant embarrassment. A lesser mistake is referring to the U.S. Capital (the capital of the U.S. is Washington, DC) when the writer meant the building, which is the Capitol.

Finally, the error that made this article a shoo-in for the Worst Travel Writing of the Day trophy:

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So few words, so many mistakes

How many mistakes can you crowd into a single sentence? If you write for, quite a few:

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I can’t understand why the writer abbreviated secretary and capitalized the abbreviation and the word state. According to the Associated Press style (which Yahoo! claims to follow), the title secretary of state should never be abbreviated and is capitalized only when it precedes a name. Maybe the writer was trying to conserve space so that there was room to repeat of the crisis.

Who oversees the editing?

Who oversees the editing of Yahoo! Finance blogs? I’m guessin’ it’s someone overseas — maybe in a non-English-speaking country. How else would you explain this?

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The duplicated about isn’t horrible. And I thought that overseas was a typo until it popped up again in the actual article:

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The real birdbrain

Anyone who is anything but a birdbrain could spot the mistakes in this paragraph from Yahoo! TV’s “Daytime in No Time”:

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How the heck do you not see the redundancy? And how the heck do you knock over a bowling ball? Doesn’t it just roll? (The bird actually used a small ball to knock over miniature bowling pins. But I quibble.)

And then I wrote… And then I wrote…

The is from the from the Yahoo! front page:

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Did I mention October 2010?

Yahoo! Celebrity used to be called omg!, but now we know that it’s a site about celebrities, not about exclamations by tweens. So, you gotta expect you’ll get expert info about celebrities.

Except that you won’t. The writers still can’t spell celeb names:

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The couple’s friend is actually Challen Cates.

They also seem to be suffering from Alzheimer’s. They can’t remember that they already told us about October 2010. And they’re not too swift when it comes to basic arithmetic; July 2012 isn’t two years after October 2010:

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And did I mention October 2010?

I can think of something else that should be cut

Yeah, well, so Ben Stiller cut his daughter from his movie. I can think of something on the Yahoo! front page that should be cut:

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