End the reign of error!

It’s not unusual to make a teensy, weensy mistake when you’re writing. A simple typo, like typing it instead of is, is the kind of error most readers can overlook. But there are some mistakes that readers can’t overlook and can’t forgive. One of those is misspelling the name of your subject and doing it in a headline. That’s what the writer did on Yahoo! Sports‘ “Prep Rally” when writing about a team from McDonogh School:

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If only there were a way the writer could see the name of the high school — like a photo of the team wearing jerseys with the school’s name. Wait, wait! This article is accompanied by a photo and this time the writer actually spelled McDonogh correctly. Unfortunately, he misspelled Baltimore — but it’s not his fault. He didn’t have a picture of Baltimore in front of him:

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But that’s just a typo, which any good proofreader would have spotted. But this is just an out-and-out error:

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Perhaps it’s time the writer handed the reins over to a real editor or proofreader — one who knows that a monarch reigns and a horse is controlled with reins.

Why would you read any more?

This is the first paragraph of an article from Yahoo! News‘ “The Lookout”:

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Why would anyone bother to read any more?

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Is this what happens when a “journalist” uses a cell phone to write an article? Does it always result in missing spaces, grammatical errors, and typos? Or are these errors unique to Yahoo! News‘ “The Lookout”?

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What are the missiles missing?

Those crackerjack proofreaders on the Yahoo! front page were a little off-target with the missiles:

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Readers are using to seeing this

Regular readers of yahoo.com are used to seeing typos on that page:

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Lordie, let’s hope that’s a typo and not a deliberate use of the word using.

This may not loner be your best option

Looking for some well-written articles about odd happenings around the world? Yahoo! News‘ “The Sideshow” has the quirky news stories; it’s the “well-written” part that’s missing:

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I have no idea if “at least one” official has said something or multiple officials have said something. I also have no idea what they said.

Call the sheriff

If arrests could be made for typos and misspellings, the writer for Yahoo! Sports‘ “Prep Rally” would be in the clinker right now:

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That picture of Courtney Jarrell is from the Jordan Sheriff’s Department.

And then I stopped reading

You can tell a lot about an article by its first paragraph. At least I think you can. After reading this opening paragraph from Yahoo! Sports‘ “From the Marbles,” I stopped reading:

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I really don’t know if the rest of the article is as bad as this. But when a single sentence contains at least one typo (and maybe two) and a violation of the subject-verb agreement rule, chances are the rest of the article isn’t going to be an improvement.

Who polices you?

Nobody proofreads, edits, or polices anything on the Yahoo! front page.  I guess that’s just one of the Internet giant’s policies:

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That’s a lot of smocks!

Just how many smocks does it take to make a 1,000-ton smockstack? That’s the question I’m left with after reading this on Yahoo! News‘ “The Sideshow”:

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Oh, I have one other question: Why the heck aren’t Yahoo!’s writers required to use a spell-checker?

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