When reading hurts

Someone needs to stop the writer of this conference summary from Yahoo! Mobile:

This sentence is too long, with too much jargon. What is a “global mobile ecosystem”? And how do you “lead and enable” it? My head hurts just trying to understand this mess of modern cliche and empty marketing-speak. Please stop the writer before someone else gets hurt.

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