Shouldn’t you be back in school?

Hasn’t school started already? So, shouldn’t this child-writer for Yahoo! Shine be in a classroom?

Certainly that wasn’t written by an adult. A real writer would know to hyphenate the adjective time-lapse. Maybe the hyphen slipped down into 21-Years, where it doesn’t belong. And what’s with the funky capitalized Years? Who writes this stuff? A third grader?

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