How many can one sentence hold?

How many errors can be squeezed into a single sentence? If it’s on Yahoo! Style, at least four, each of which is completely avoidable:

each of which sty

If you’re writing about people, the preferred pronoun is who or whom, not which. There’s an apostrophe missing in what should be brand’s. And of course there are two misspelled names: Missy Elliott and Cara Delevingne.

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2 Responses to “How many can one sentence hold?”

  1. searchermike Says:

    We really don’t care what we say, so long as we drop a lot of names (some of which we just might spell correctly.)


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