Do not put statements in the negative form.
And don’t start sentences with a conjunction.
If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a
great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.
De-accession euphemisms.
If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Last, but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.
~William Safire
To write simply is as difficult as to be good. ~ W. Somerset Maugham
I can’t write five words but that I change seven. ~ Dorothy Parker
Nothing you write, if you hope to be good, will ever come out as you first hoped. ~ Lillian Hellman
Writing isn’t hard; thinking is hard. ~ Saul Pett
Modern English, especially written English, is full of bad habits that spread by imitation and that can be avoided if one is willing to take the necessary trouble. ~ George Orwell
No one can write decently who is distrustful of the reader’s intelligence or whose attitude is patronizing. ~ E. B. White
If you want to get rich from writing, write the sort of thing that’s read by persons who move their lips when they’re reading to themselves. ~ Don Marquis
A period is to let the writer know he has finished his thought, and he should stop there if he will only take the hint. ~ Art Linkletter
Short words are best, and the old words when short are the best of all. ~ Winston Churchill
I would never use a long word where a short one would answer the purpose. I know there are professors in the country who ligate arteries. Other surgeons only tie them, and it stops the bleeding just as well ~ Oliver Wendell Holmes
Take care that you never spell a word wrong. Always before you write a word, consider how it is spelled, and, if you do not remember, turn to a dictionary. ~ Thomas Jefferson
An ounce of example is worth a pound of generalities. ~ Henry James
Be careful that you write accurately rather than much. ~ Erasmus
An editor is a person who knows more about writing than writers do but who has escaped the terrible desire to write. ~ E. B. White
I believe more in the scissors than I do the pencil. ~ Truman Capote
Write as if paid by the period. ~ Author Unknown
The point of good writing is knowing when to stop. ~ Lucy Montgomery
I’m sorry. If I’d more time, I would have written a shorter letter. ~ Mark Twain
Someone told me that each equation I include in the book would halve the sales. ~ Stephen Hawking
I cannot think of anybody who doesn’t need an editor, even though some people claim they don’t. ~ Toni Morrison
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards. ~ Robert Heinlein
Nature fits all her children with something to do,
He who would write and can’t write, can surely review.
~James Russell Lowell
Clever words are not as good as straight talk. ~ Chinese proverb
You’ll never get anywhere with all those damned little short sentences. ~ Gregory Clark to fellow Toronto Star newspaperman Ernest Hemingway
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentence, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. ~ William Strunk
Write something, even if it’s just a suicide note. ~ Gore Vidal
No passion in the world is equal to the passion to alter someone else’s draft. ~ H.G. Wells
I had a good editor once who called a good story a ‘talkie,’ which meant it was a story that people were going to talk about. ~ John Feinstein
Verbs are the action words of the language and the most important. Turn to any passage on any page of a successful novel and notice the high percentage of verbs. ~ William Sloan
The best writing is rewriting. ~ E.B. White
There is no great writing, only great rewriting. ~ Justice Louis Brandeis
Half my life is an act of revision. ~ John Irving
Revision is one of the true pleasures of writing. ~ Bernard Malamud
Confident writers have the courage to speak plainly; to let their thoughts shine rather than their vocabulary. ~ Ralph Keyes
Editing is rewording activity. ~ Author Unknown
Learn punctuation; it is your little drum set, one of the few tools oyu have to signal the reader where the beats and emphases go. (If you get it wrong, any least thing, the editor will throw your manuscript out.) Punctuation is not like musical notation; it doesn’t indicate the length of pauses, but instead signifies logical relations. There are all sorts of people out there who know these things very well. You have to be among them even to begin. ~ Annie Dillard
What is easy to read has been difficult to write. The labour of writing and rewriting, correcting and recorrecting, is the due exacted by every good book from its author, even if he knows from the beginning exactly what he wants to say. A limpid style is invariably the result of hard labour, and the easily flowing connection of sentence with sentence and paragraph with paragraph has always been won by the sweat of the brow. ~ G. M. Trevelyan
Only a mediocre writer is always at his best. ~ W. Somerset Maugham
There are two kinds of editors, those who correct your copy and those who say it’s wonderful. ~ Theodore H. White
I see my [editorial] role as helping the writer to realize his or her intention. I never want to impose any other goal on the writer, and I never want the book to be mine. ~ Faith Sale
Do not write so that you can be understood, write so that you cannot be misunderstood. ~ Epictetus
Don’t write merely to be understood. Write so that you cannot possibly be misunderstood. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
The best way to become a successful writer is to read good writing, remember it, and then forget where you remember it from. ~ Gene Fowler
The secret of good writing is to say an old thing in a new way or to say a new thing in an old way. ~ Richard Harding Davis
Perfection is achieved, not when there’s nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. ~ Antoine de Saint Exupery
The ability to quote is a serviceable substitute for wit. ~ W. Somerset Maugham
Don’t write the parts people don’t read. ~ Elmore Leonard
To write or even speak English is not a science but an art. There are no reliable words…. Whoever writes English is involved in a struggle that never lets up even for a sentence. He is struggling against vagueness, against obscurity, against the lure of the decorative adjective, against the encroachment of Latin and Greek, and, above all, against the worn-out phrases and dead metaphors with which the language is cluttered up. ~ George Orwell
To get the right word in the right place is a rare achievement. To condense the diffused light of a page of thought into the luminous flash of a single sentence, is worthy to rank as a prize composition just by itself…Anybody can have ideas–the difficulty is to express them without squandering a quire of paper on an idea that ought to be reduced to one glittering paragraph. ~ Mark Twain
I notice that you use plain, simple language, short words and brief sentences. That is the way to write English – it is the modern way and the best way. Stick to it; don’t let fluff and flowers and verbosity creep in. When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don’t mean utterly, but kill most of them – then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. An adjective habit, or a wordy, diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to get rid of as any other vice. ~ Mark Twain
Word-carpentry is like any other kind of carpentry: you must join your sentences smoothly. ~ Anatole France
Usage is the only test. I prefer a phrase that is easy and unaffected to a phrase that is grammatical. ~ W. Somerset Maugham
Word has somehow got around that the split infinitive is always wrong. That is a piece with the outworn notion that it is always wrong to strike a lady. ~ James Thurber
Writing with voice is writing into which someone has breathed. It has that fluency, rhythm, and liveliness that exist naturally in the speech of most people when they are enjoying a conversation. Writing with real voice has the power to make you pay attention and understand –the words go deep. ~ Peter Elbow
Slang is a language that rolls up its sleeves, spits on its hands and goes to work. ~ Carl Sandburg
Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are unnecessary. ~ Frank L. Visco
We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master. ~ Ernest Hemingway
Editing should be, especially in the case of old writers, a counseling rather than a collaborating task. The tendency of the writer-editor to collaborate is natural, but he should say to himself, ”How can I help this writer to say it better in his own style?” and avoid ”How can I show him how I would write it, if it were my piece? ~ James Thurber
Anyone nit-picking enough to write a letter of correction to an editor doubtless deserves the error that provoked it. ~ Alvin Toffler
Writers’ bedtimes vary, but few have been spared the shock of a copy editor’s early wake-up call. ~ Bill Walsh
Only kings, presidents, editors, and people with tapeworms have the right to use the editorial “we.” ~ Mark Twain
English is such a deliciously complex and undisciplined language, we can bend, fuse, distort words to all our purposes. We give old words new meanings, and we borrow new words from any language that intrudes into our intellectual environment. ~ Willard Gaylin
Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? He thinks I don’t know the ten-dollar words. I know them all right. But there are older and simpler and better words, and those are the ones I use. ~ Ernest Hemingway
Words, like glass, obscure when they do not aid vision. ~ Joseph Joubert
Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind. ~ Rudyard Kipling
To write well, express yourself like common people but think like a wise man. Or, think as wise men do, but speak as the common people do. ~ Aristotle
The proper words in the proper places are the true definition of style. ~ Jonathan Swift
The finest language is mostly made up of simple unimposing words. ~ George Eliot
[W]hen a good writer is having fun, the audience is almost always having fun too. ~ Stephen King
No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader. ~ Robert Frost
Don’t use words too big for the subject. Don’t say ‘infinitely’ when you mean ‘very’; otherwise you’ll have no word left when you want to talk about something really infinite. Don’t say it was ‘delightful’; make us say ‘delightful’ when we’ve read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers “Please, will you do the job for me?” ~ C.S. Lewis
If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~ e.e.cummings
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. ~ James Michener
Like stones, words are laborious and unforgiving, and the fitting of them together, like the fitting of stones, demands great patience and strength of purpose and particular skill. ~ Edmund Morrison
Writers have two main problems. One is writer’s block, when the words won’t come at all, and the other is logorrhea, when the words come so fast that they can hardly get to the wastebasket in time. ~ Cecelia Bartholomeo
August 16, 2008 at 7:30 am
Your blog is interesting!
Keep up the good work!
March 10, 2009 at 11:15 am
Wow. So many amazing thoughts from some of the best writers of all time. Thanks for compiling these. Keep it up!
March 24, 2011 at 5:11 pm
These are great!
October 10, 2014 at 7:33 pm
This is marvelous! Thank you!
(p.s., I think Twain was quoting Pascal on the “brevity” quotation: http://quoteinvestigator.com/2012/04/28/shorter-letter/)
October 10, 2014 at 9:11 pm
Thanks! And thanks for the link. I didn’t know about that site. Very interesting.
October 10, 2014 at 9:13 pm
I had to look it up for a project a year or so ago. I loved that site–and bookmarked it!
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